All Comments on 'A Sissy in the 22nd Century Pt. 05'

I really liked your story. Very well described as a dystopian world. The experiences of the characters look very cute and authentic. I look forward to continuing!

The last chapter already? There was some content I followed and hoped we'd hear more about, the fog of mystery about Jesse's origin, why is he questioning the brave new world when everyone else seems to be content with their roles? What secrets are so dark that people get their memories blanked out for finding out about it? Why did Jesse recognize Suzi's daddy as a familiar face on first sight? What will Betsy and her bright intelligence puzzle together when she's bored already after just one week of breeding duties? And the doctor, rumored to be connected to the makers of the algorythm, who shows obvious interest in the young sissy and is a lead towards deeper into the riddles and mysteries...

The sexy part of the story is really well done (and never enough) but the criminal case or the action story is prepared but not written. I feel the world you sketched here still has potential and there is enough to form a second installment.

I'd love to read more of it, thanks for writing and sharing the story.

Hi there, sorry, yes this is not the last chapter by far. I have just not had time to write or even edit and bring over recently. There is a certain chunk more on the site where this story is originally posted- check my bio, but it is not yet finished even there I am afraid.

Finally some decent writing for a sissy tale xxx