All Comments on 'A Sissy is Born'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago

hot af

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
more please

This is wonderful! I love this feeling, aligning with joe and feeling the pursuit of a dominant who is many steps ahead but in no hurry. Feeling the seduction and building of hunger. I hope this will continue down this path.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
hated the ending

Dick chastity cage ! terrible thing to do

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
More!

Any plans for sequels?

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Miss you

Miss you. Will wait for you like always.

Toby_dogToby_dogover 3 years ago
Poor grammar

Your grammar needs a lot of work. The repetition drew away from the story. You need to do a much better job of editing.

GrrrreatImaginationGrrrreatImaginationover 2 years ago

What a compelling tale this was! It was full of innocence, like Joe, and mystery, like the King. The bit at the end with the cage seemed to take us off in a new direction. Of course, consorting with a strange man could in a foreign country could hardly be expected to be a steady, predictable sequence of events, so perhaps the direction isn't new.

In any event, I'm off to read Ch. 02. Thanks for sharing.

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