All Comments on 'A Slave to the Servants Ch. 11'

Started reading your story this morning and I'm almost all caught up. Great story, keep up the great work.

This is great . I stayed up all night trying to catch up.

Okay, seriously, I've read each chapter at least 4 times each. I think I've finally figured out who the 'daddy' is. Chapter 11, page 3, last paragraph. Ciara is looking through the eyes of the 'daddy' and he is thinking, "My favored sword arm was ready and the men fell before it."

Dancing with joy!!!

Lol I feel like an absolute nitpicker here but I can't keep ignoring it! Both you and your editor are managing to confuse breath and breathe.

i.e. "I wouldn't be able to breathe" & "I could see my breath forming in a mist before my face" -sorry I had to say something about it, forgive me :)

The interesting point being that very "smart" folk have a tendency to get into

trouble because they do not accept something that they have been told to do without proof. In this case the cost of keeping humans ended up coming back and biting them even though they are very intelligent!

This is very good story telling. hope we can have more series after i get to finish this one.

Totally loving the new twist! Also enjoying the fact that Ciara and her Masters are beginning to identify with each other. Can't wait to see where it will all lead.

Yes we may figure out the plot twist but you make it so much fun. I love the fact that the baby is connecting and helping her be closer to the men. Great work.

I told myself I was going to go to bed after this chapter. Shame on you. Now I have to read more. I love your novel. If it were in book form I would buy and and treasure it as I do all my books.

You write beautifully!!!

I finished about two pages of this chapter and then fell asleep, I woke up thirty minutes ago to finish it because I NEEDED to know. Im so thrilled with this!!!! I love the idea of her being pregnant and I feel like it will be a huge twist to this story!

I am totally addicted and didnt see the twist coming..this is an awesome story..Please keep writing.

Yes, I saw the twist coming. I realized after she got her period and was told the other human slaves had no periods, I remembered the vitamin drink and noticed how it was the only difference between her and the other human slaves. Then I remembered how the fake masters had tested the liquid and found no nutritional properties, I thought, maybe the drink was actually to keep the human slaves infertile! Which of coarse led to the thought and implications of pregnancy. I wonder though, why everyone is told it is vitamin drink and not what it truly is. What is the purpose there, the plot twist? I am enjoying the addition of the strange symptoms that she is having with her pregnancy and can't wait to find out what happens. I love your story!

So she's pregnant, but they share memories? So, she is like their sister now? Are they experiencing the same things? Like having her memories and whatnot.

There are several authors, yourself included, who I wish would publish in book form. My eyes hurt from hours upon hours of staring at a computer screen. I like something physical to have and read. I guess I'm old fashioned. I said this would be the last chapter I would read today, but . . .

I have no better title for this comment. Cause, I mean, c'mon! Who wouldnt have had figured that she was gonna get knocked up sooner or later? But this is the best one I've read here on this site and this is so, so, so, addicting to read.... I'm just glad there's a lot more chapters to go before I have to stop so I'm satisfied.... For now....

fuck you have fast fingers for typing .?

I guessed the twist too but dont really think it matters I noticed the vitimin drink too and think I know whos behind but although I maybe have some as to why it still makes what exactly happens next a mystery for me. Cant wait to find out so although this twist wasnt so secret its deff keeping me reading so job done in my eyes.

The baby is part of them. They are bonded. They are also bonded to this baby. The baby is giving her the memories. Boy I bet they are going crazy trying to get time off to find out how she is coming into their minds.

This better not be like Alien or Prometheus and the baby like, EATS Ciara

Great, you brought freaking babies into it. Now a story that I was already far too obsessed with has just gotten cranked up to the next level. My only complaint with bound to my mate was I didn't get to see the pups so I'm so excited for this to play out. I know there have to be twists and turns and rough spots, but I sencersly hope there can be a happy ending to this tale.

This is the second time im reading this story. and i must say... i just love feeling smug in reading the last sentence.

I am so annoyed at how addicted i am to this story. This has been so well written and organized I would think I was reading a book I paid money to own. Please say you write and sell books!

I'm so addicted I said earlier I was gonna stop for today well I didn't lol I want this boook

I'm always frustrated at the end of chapter that all I can do is award 5 stars. There should be an "off-the-charts" option for top shelf quality erotic fiction like this. The publishers of John Norman's Gor Series should find it profitable. If drivel like "50 Shades of Grey" or the classic "Story of O" can be published, this certainly can.

absolutely...without reservation -- exquisite. Thank you.

Please look into it getting publish! I would love to buy this as a book! Keep up with the stories! And can't wait to read more!

This is fantastic! Saw it coming but beautifully done. This story has had me in tears and whooping for joy! You are a genius.

You are very talented......I am loving this story so far.....nice twist, anxious to see what happens next.....and why the current twist occured

As soon as you began to talk about menstruations I knew where you were getting at... but still, 11th chapter so far and I'm really into your writing and your story ! Especially the part where they share their mind, I was kinda curious about that ! ^^ So thxx for the great story and I'm looking forward to see what will happen with this pregnancy. :)

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Great story. Brilliantly done

Finals? End-of-semester projects? WTF!? Who has time for that nonsense? I have stories to read...

An excellent tale, if not my usual fare. Can't wait to see where it goes from here.

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must have been something in the vitamin drink that the cheapskates eliminated that kept her infertile . ahhh now we will have a hybride ......

I knew it!!

Goodness, I was having the most uncontrollable fanspasn of my life reading this story thinking," They're connected! They're connected! Somehow their bonds have been connected and the dreams are a form of how the bond is shown!" This is my first time reading through this, and I swear to you..You are a genius and so far, one of my favourites. I only have about three favourite authors on this site....and you, my dear writer, have just been deemed the fourth. I'm so grateful that I decided to look upon one of my author's favourite reads...and had a strange urge to click upon your name.

You're writing is beautiful. It took a small amount to get used to, but truthfully, I think I was just unready for such a gorgeous display of words and plotlinne that was about to unfold and blossom like a flower before me.

:U I do have some suspicions, and I do hope that I'm right...It'll be nice to see if I am future wise. :p

1.) I believe lovely Ciara is pregnant..

2.) The nutrient drink was a plausible cause for her infertility..

3.) The Female horrors must have known this and created the syrum and labled it as "nutrients" and sold it to their...slaves. Who would question their hidden, ghostly authority anyways? I have a feeling Ciara _will_ meet a Female one on one..

the outcome...uncertain and it scares me. :c

4.) The baby is the reason she is now bonded and feels such as they do and shares such intricate dreams..

Especially dreans that include feelings, places, and such that either side should have no been able to experience.

Once again...

I'd like to say you are amazing.

It takes true skill to make me fangirl..

It takes even bigger skill to make me fangirl uncontrollably.

You, my dear author..

made me squeel wildly and left me incapable of reading further as I calmed...A few moments after picking up again, the feelings returned; Tenfold, I should say.

I'm sorry for spewing a bit of emotion every which way here..

but thank you! Thank you ever so much and I will probably be left wanting more, as always. c:

I wish you wonders in your future writing and your life. c:

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Just another fan

I figured it might happen when she got her period. But as soon as she started getting sick in the morning I was sure. But the shared dreams I am thinking they are more than just dreams. I think she is now bonded to Damian and his brother's. Am I right? Can't wait to see where you take this. I would buy this from Amazon in e-book form if you had it their.it's a great story.

I thought Ciara would end up pregnant once the cheap idiot new masters took her off of her prophylactics... err nutrients.

I figured it out after she was sick the second time. I love reading this and wish it was a book. It would be so much easier to read.

It was obvious from the start of the story when you said she was given the “nutrient drink” everyday and confirmed when her fake masters declared it had no nutritional benefits. If one gender is dominant all the time then they are essential to breeding, it’s obvious that the alien women wouldn’t want their men to know that their men can reproduce with other species. Yikes though they’re all big guys, a natural birth could be rough.

Love, the way the story is progressing though. Just hoping that they recover her before there’s too much emotional upheaval.

Although I suspected she was pregnant -I wasn’t sure if that’s where u were going with it! I’m on the edge of my seat hoping they get her back. I am so enthralled in ur story I literally have been reading it every single chance I get from mornings before having to get ready for work to sitting in my car at red lights! I’m so obsessed with the characters and plot- I’d say I’m heavily invested and that’s not an easy thing to do- very few books/stories/articles are able to draw me in and keep my attention as you babe done! I’ve been reading every moment of free time I get. You know u have a clear skill when you are able to captivate ones attention and thoughts as you have! I’ve never ever been interested enough in ANY of the stories on this site to make it past 2-3 chapters MAX- after that I’ve totally lost interest and could usually care less what happens next- certainly I’ve never cared enough to keep reading! With your story I not only am interested im totally and utterly addicted!! Great job!

This is amazing. I’m totally spellbound by this story!

I love this story and the direction it’s going, nice job! I’m starting to like these sci-fi fantasy epochs on here a lot more than the short and dirty stories.

One funny thing I saw in this chapter though: right after the warriors took out a group of thieves, they told her in her Motel vision that people had honor on their planet and they don’t have to worry about thieves! I know, I just nit picked… sorry!

really, really, really excellent. I could not stop reading. Very skillfull - you're a treasure! it got so I forgot to click the 5 star I was in such a rush to read the next chapter. Looking forward to more!

Holy shit now it is getting better, Now she is going to meet the Big Bitch..

Love the story but not sure i can keep reading. The sleeping box is triggering my claustrophobia