All Comments on 'A Slave's Exam Pt. 02'

Love the details. On the edge of my seat for the next chapter.

First off the magic phrase applies here ...”your kink is not my kink and that’s ok”

Your story is well written and detailed but it left me feeling like you’d missed the whole point of why shy was having this scene. In the 1st chapter you wrote that during their previous encounter including another couple that the other sub was miserable with her predicament and was glaring at the sub being examined in this chapter. With the main point being that she felt as though she was being blamed for what the other sub was going through.

Is this current scene meant to reassure her or is it being done as a punishment ? I don’t understand why an overly aggressive Domme has been included or why she’s being pushed to do things that are outside her comfort zone.

I found bits of it erotic even though the medical scene as described isn’t my kind of thing I do have a pulse and so find some parts arousing.

Tess (UK)

Hope you are writing more!