All Comments on 'A Slice of Life'

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VanquishedVanquishedover 2 years ago

I like this story a lot. The only bit that wasn't to my taste was the stuff with smoking, but I get how that can be hot to someone else, just not my thing. Really liked the way he takes her shoes off and cleans them, and the foot cleaning too.

46696C697046696C6970over 2 years agoAuthor

Thank you very much Vanquished. As a big fan of your stories it means a lot to me to get such high praise from you.

hadesshadessover 2 years ago

amazing story i liked every bit of it

i really liked the smocking part that was good I'm glad you added that

46696C697046696C6970over 2 years agoAuthor

hadess I am glad you liked it. Should I try and go for a sequel?

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