by MistressArtemis
Good word picturing reading as though you were lolling on your couch, reminiscing. I see this as a 4-star and delicious as a first story. Admittedly, I couldn't write myself out of a wet paper bag but I'll follow to see if you can keep up your good work with further material. Thanks
A decent first attempt. A bit too far over the edge for my taste, (unrealistic) but better than most of the recent first time submissions.