All Comments on 'A Special Gift Ch. 02'

I think you wrote it quickly and didn't wait to read it critically. Then next time you write it will be much more descriptive and erotic. No idea why I say that, it just feels like there is good stuff in there.

Congrats

Greg

the love between them radiated through the computer screen. very different and a welcome treat from the usual mc stories.maybe it would be good to have the husband be the slave next? very enjoyable pops1943

You did an awesome job on this story. You placed her in an interesting situation but not a degrading or threatening situation. Very well written. I look forward to reading your other stories. Jim