All Comments on 'A Species' Survival Ch. 03'

Early access to chapters of this story and my other stories "A Strange Compulsion" and "A Wolf's Rage" are available on my website.

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The story has degraded and the narrative isn't improving. 3*

Loved it! 5/5 You wrote the emotions and their intensity very well. Looking forward to more.

Unimaginative clap trap. Your writing is more cookie cutter and formulaic than it is titillating. It’s redundant to say someone got on her knees and then on all fours. Just say she got on all fours or he took her doggie style. She got on her hands and knees and presented herself for his pleasure. And using the work cock three or four times in the same paragraph is BORING! It’s not just a cock. It’s a fuck stick, a rod, a dick, a baby batter delivery system, his staff of life - I could go on but won’t.

I suspect this is a sock puppet driven account. The 35 favorites a day after published for what is a horribly written and constructed story, combined with how high a rating it has, and very very prominent push for "give me money" with every post.... The whole thing reads like a racket.

The stuff with the sister is fun, but the scene with Tara is too brief

Badly written story

YOUR WHOLE SERIES OF THIS STORY IS PURE RUBBISH AND A WASTE OF THE READERS TIME, DO US A FAVOR AND DON'T POST ANY MORE OF THIS SHIT, YOU ARE NOT A WRITER BY ANY MEANS.

Oddly enough this is how my boss got pregnant with her sons baby and her boyfriend thinks it’s his the baby now a two year old and he looks just like his dad her son

Fun

4/5