All Comments on 'A Species' Survival Ch. 04'

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Great stuff

Look, incest, harem and impregnation elements are kind of fodder for easy high scores around here. They're my kinks too, but being a long-time reader I do need to point out some gripes.

The story is written with too much "character A does X. character B does y" and dialogue that feels like either stating the obvious or just very wooden. None of them say anything unexpected.

There's a lack of insight into the characters minds and emotions, how they feel about each other, themselves etc. That means after a few sex scenes it's starting to get pretty bland.

Remember when this series was supposed to be an alien scifi sort of deal? Lmfao where did that go. Aside from a small magic reference to pheromones every now and then, this whole thing is just a cheap and generic smut writing. It's lost anything that made it unique.

Absolutely fucking sucking wonderful, totally debauched and depraved, both of them sex crazed to the extreme, fabulous. Cunt crazed fucker, Lancashire, UK.

Well, at list this time in place of repeating "cock" too many times, you repeated "dick" more or less same times ... lol

For me; Relationships are a big turn on. When it is the same person and the same sex it gets boring quick.