All Comments on 'A Step Apart Ch. 06'

Would have given you 5 stars but for all the grammatical errors. Fix them before you publish the next story.

Great story please keep it going.

Amazing ending. Got crazy last chapter and this one!

How many more chapters?

need a sequel about his college life plesae???

Very weird. Dont write about things you know nothing about. Like college football recruiting

dude has balls

Good story really enjoyed it . Needs another chapter please

Good story. There are many stories but i really like the drama and sex part since sex scenes had me hard hmm Maybe a continuation.? College life and mowing through some pussies.? Great work btw

It took a lot of effort to read and like this story, the earlier chapters showed that Matt was a passive loser letting others control him, so glad that he finally made his way to manning up and taking charge of his life! I do hope for a sequel of his college life, I hope he doesn't become a douche like his father, hopefully Matt makes an effort to find true happiness with just one lover (hint hint Jessica) :)

(1/4/2024) I liked where this series was going in the beginning, but was disappointed when Stephanie turned into a nut-job. I’ve mentioned a few times in my comments on this website that I’m a romantic at heart and enjoy reading about star-crossed lovers struggling for their happily ever after. I almost bailed but stuck with the story because it was still an engaging read. The ending was well done. This story could easily be the basis for a screenplay, IMO. I have one critique though. There should have been confirmation of Sharon’s impregnation. Then the ending would have been perfect, IMO. I gave each chapter five stars.

Excellent ending to a very hot story. But please get an editor or at least a proofreader..