by Myrph
While the story is quite decent, it seemed to me you got bored writing it. I mean, "Meeting the Minotaur" feels lighthearted and well written, but here I see lots of stamps and lack of attention to the details.
I don't know what you'd like to hear as a feedback, but please don't burn yourself out - unlike monster girls, we humans need to take a break sometimes.
Hmm, yeah I probably could take a short break. Quality is better than quantity eh?