All Comments on 'A Story at the Beach'

Unreadable. Spelling and grammatical errors. You didn't take the time, so I won't.

Why stop there? Make it 14" and wide as a tuna can.

Very poorly written.

Westman at least you have a few stories published, the other critics don’t have a username even. I might read one of your stories, too see how I might can improve my writing skills.

At least Westman99 has a username and has published a few stories. You other two are afraid to give writing a try. I don’t understand why people want to trash another person just because they can.

Agree with previous anon about grammatical and repetitive errors. Sounds like English may be your second language. Nice idea for shorter story, but constantly feeling compelled to edit impedes most lines of thought. Suggest you seek an editor to assist.

Very hot and sexy story. I had sex a few times at the world famous Blacks Beach in San Diego where I live. It’s so sexy to have others watch you fucking. For the plot of your story I give you 10 stars. You might look into getting Grammarly a program that helps with spelling and grammar there is a free version available.

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