All Comments on 'A Story of Betty and Eric Ch. 03'

Elizabeth is a SPECTACULAR woman, Eric is fortunate to be married to her.

Wonderful story.

She wears quality leather and your writing is fluid.

She should also sodomize him with a dildo much bigger than her husband's cock.

To assert her authority and break him gently.

Good story, though perhaps unrealistically fast. That's not unusual for online erotica, though.

Lots of grammar errors. One comment says that your writing is fluid, but I think the grammar mistakes make it somewhat less than fluid. There are many volunteer editors on this site. Please consult one.