All Comments on 'A Stranger Comes To Texas'

by SandyMarl

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29wordsforsnow29wordsforsnowabout 3 years ago

Yep, a big one-teethed laugh for this fine beefsteak of a short story; a slight tang of black humor on the outside, butter-soft to chew over the word plays, and bloody absurd to its core garnished with a Texan-sized gulp of BBQ sauce made of bright blue gags - and they even rhyme.

Now, how to get that permanent marker off my teeth?

Thanks for this brilliant piece of humor, worth many re-reads.

chytownchytownabout 3 years ago

***I Remember them and that a cute 750 worth of a story!! Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

good try. More sex would be nice though....

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I took my French Woman to Texas once. She saw a menu offering "Freedom Fries" and never returned

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Very funny. Five stars from me. But Ricardo doesn't sounds french (i am french), it sounds spanish or mexicain.

SandyMarlSandyMarl7 months agoAuthor

Anon Commenter; I appreciate you taking the time to comment and let me know that you were amused by this little story and the 5 star review. I also appreciate your astute observation that the original name used for the Frenchman didn't sound proper. I agree. At your suggestion I had resubmitted the story with a name that I believe sounds more in character for our Frenchman who mosied to Texas. --Sandy

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I am a curious individual (that may be said of me in several ways); I want to see what's around the corner or over the next hill. I am a scientific person and I use my education in the sciences to run my own company. I love the play of lush, rich words in the English languag...