All Comments on 'A Student's Brainwashing Ch. 08 - Alt'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Thank you for this alternate ending! I was so upset by the original but this is way better

ErikaLErikaLover 2 years ago

This is a better ending. The original ending would have ended badly for everyone. The women would have been a mindless slave and their Master and the Daddies on the ship would have been arrested following the disappearance of both girls. The police would have checked the email messages and search history of Hanna and Grace for clues. Hanna and Grace (even if her path was more "forced") can happily be a slave and be hired as a "personal assistants" (maybe "persuade" potential clients in private) and no one would notice. Well other women would notice and passively aggressively treat Hanna and Grace badly.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Thank you for the happy ending.

sd518sd518over 2 years ago

Way better than the original ending. Plus this one gives you a chance to revisit the characters later.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Can we please get a sequel to this?

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