All Comments on 'A Students Research Project.'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

excellent!

Ilovetophoto68Ilovetophoto68over 1 year ago

Fantastic. I loved the theme, alder guy and young girl. I have been there and it was the best 7 years of my life. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Wow, so beautiful. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

5 Stars. Very nicely paced story, I totally enjoyed it, the characters and plot were quite interesting and believable.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Clever premise.

Sex is too matter-of-fact.

Three stars.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Where is the denouement?

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

5 stars - I really enjoyed the build-up between the two characters, and it felt like they had built a very real relationship with each other by the end. Especially liked the way David guided Stella - she was spoiled for her first time! :D Liked the subtext too, about how David kept going despite the tragedy in his life. Great story.

Seawolf2002Seawolf2002about 1 year ago

This is the way it should be between two lovers, slow, caring of feelings. I know for a fact in my 60 years that the sharing feeling are in involved. The warmth in this story shows how it was. Well Done. Thank you

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

A lovely, warm, gentle story!

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English Male...mature. Late 60's. I have been in two long term relationships but am now single. I have three adult children. I have been reading stories on here for a while and thought I would have a look around. Recently tried my hand at writing....happy for you to give const...