All Comments on 'A Succubus Awakens Ch. 04'

Gods… or whatever… help Gwen if Amy ever finds out what she did to Laura

Yay! Another episode of the friends adventures!

I look forward to seeing Gwen turn really evil. Maybe giving Laura depraved missions or tasks to humiliate her and destroy her reputation. Just to show her who is in control. Wondering what will happen next.

This story is SO GOOD! <3

@anon I don't know what you're talking about. Gwen is a good little succubus and would *never* do anything evil ;)

"If someone, or more likely some group, was censoring it then they had a terrifying level of control over information." So, umm, Bezos is a demon? Good to know.

Loving this slow burn, the building relationship of Amy and Gwen. It's lovely to read, and really is the beautiful heart of the story. Please don't drive them apart!

But, I will read to the end.

Great story line and excellent writing! Thanks, Autumn_Ash, and please continue!

I really appreciate how both of them have desires to protect the other, that sort of thing *is* part of love to me. So long as that remains, I believe Gwen can keep some shred of humanity.

This is brilliant stuff!

What I love about this is that it's a really good story with interesting characters. Enjoying it very much. Part of me wishes I was Amy or Gwen. I wouldn't mind which. I could do either!

So well written it's sexy lit rather than porn with a plot.

Good stories can fit into several categories. I love the romance in this story, but I keep wondering when Gwen is going to take an interest in men. Isn't that what succumbs do? 5 stars.

A different and very interesting take. I have no idea which way it will go but it looks as though they're falling in love although Gwen is more invested than Amy at the moment. 5⛤