All Comments on 'A Succubus Awakens Ch. 06'

I am way too emotionally invested in this story by now. Stop pulling at *my* threads, Ash!

Another great chapter. Their relationship is well described. A pleasure to read.

Very nice chapter, and story overall. Very sexy.

If Amy really becomes a demon hunter, I think they will make a very badass duo :)

The fight scene turned out quite well, and it's a nice piece of lore and world building with Remy. But really its the intimacy of this chapter that nails it. Amy's acceptance of her own corruption, and the dialogue between them both. It's heartwarming, even as the sex was deliciously sexy. Well written, well done. Looking forward to Chapter 7.

Aww, you guys are going to make me cry! And thanks for the help with the fight scene wolf!

Amazing series. A big highlight of this neck of the site. Great mix of world building and hot hot hot scenes. I can safely say that you're growing, and on your way to standing in the top ranks like kingmaker, or sisters of the fallen series.

Such a great succubus story! Really love the developments between Gwen and Amy. Hope Amy never finds a way to turn Gwen human again.

And here it is in all it's glory. Outstanding chapter... but damn it, now I need another one!

This was adorable, tense, and also kind of cathartic. Amy and Gwen have reached this compromise that is sort of like being enthralled willingly. Reminds me of how ghouls work in Vampire. If I'm honest, that is sort of the end game I'm pulling for. This slow, and kind of sensual, corruption and merging of energies between them is another thing entirely from utter domination and I'm hoping it transforms Amy into a being that is somewhere between succubus and human. I have a few ways I would do it, but I am super looking forward to what you do!

Okay. I got the plot stuff out of the way, and now I am going to gush about how friggen *good* this chapter was!

Ahhhhhhh!!!

We finally get Amy and Gwen being intimate (and Gwen is not the only going feral this chapter, let me tell you). As hot as it was (scalding might be the best adjective) the duo getting it on had me half-crying for them at first. Cannot wait to see where things go from here.

I have nothing to add to what has already been said. Great chapter, I can't wait to see where your writer's succubus takes you. 5 stars.

Good instalment, in fact, great. Love the way Amy and Gwen finally got together. Very well written.

Adorably written :)

I'm worried that both kept secrets though, and that Jim made Amy promise not to tell about them. I sense a breakup on the future.