by K.A. Ryde
the dude who originally started this series is a much better writer, this was extremely boring in comparison. If you're gonna write more you will definitely benefit from studying his style.
Idk out of 4 comments when I'm commenting 2 say it's boring, but DANG I freakin loved it, I'm new to erotica's maybe I should read the orignal writer, but for me It was GREAT.
I really enjoyed this story. The less formal setting of college is something that works really well. I think you developed the characters well in what is quite a short story. I would certainly like to see more from 'a day in the life of Lucy, the Disciplinary Officer' :)
Hey! I thought this was great and thank you for the shoutout at the beginning!