All Comments on 'A Sunny Disposition'

Do more

This would have been even more amazing if it had been fleshed out more with humiliation, disgust etc.

I actually love it the way it is.

This was hot! Write more. It would’ve been nice to add more humiliation or roughness.

Grammar check

Just ugly and raunchy. No value here. No point to the story.

Really enjoyed this. You have a feel of exactly what to write about and what to ignore. Short and very sweet. Super stuff!

It's unbelieveable! It makes no sense the way they got her. Not a sound, complain, scream.... We are not looking for a piece of art, but one needs a lot of good will to like this one.

Maybe the next one.