A Surrogate for Emily

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Jack's semen, long denied release, exploded from his seminal vesicle to merge with millions of potent swimming sperm from his balls. The thick, white, searing concoction shot up the urethra to crash out against Emily's cervix, hosing down her convulsive vagina with multiple volleys of hot cum. Emily and Jack cried in ecstasy as their shared orgasm continued non-stop for five minutes. Tears flowed. Cries sounded as, finally the sexual tension and pressure felt by both lovers for months and years was released.

Bodies ultimately fell still and silent, the only sound was the rasping, gasping breaths. Jack lay on Emily, his lips down against her soft neck. After a few moments of rest and recovery, Jack rolled to his right, taking Emily with him -- her thighs still clutching his buns, his cock still mostly hard inside of her. Their eyes slowly opened to regard their new life's mate. Jack's hands gently moved over his lover's shoulders, her smooth back and the soft globes of her buttocks. Likewise, Emily's soft, long fingers explored Jack from the thick dark hair on his head all the way to the crease between his smooth, hairless manly buns.

The lovers nuzzled. Jack pulled the sheet up and, naked under the sheet, the two fell into a deep sleep...a first in ages...with Jack still inside his woman. One lucky, strong, fast sperm made its way with its X chromosome ahead of all others through the opening of a cervix. Another little girl's happy life was about to begin -- just like the little girl had dreamed of her new mommy and daddy the other night at 2am.

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AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Sorry, but the character of Kirk was shallow. Then the fact that Emily didn't see that Kirk was gay....after being married to him? I can guarantee that people at work would have easily seen that Kirk was gay, thus Emily would have know. so his side of the story is not very believable. Then the fact that Jack took Kirk's leaving oh so well, and never hesitated to engage with Emily, or the fact that Kirk just gave him everything. Good topic, bad way of writing it up.

alan9alan9over 3 years agoAuthor
Thank you, Writer2000!

I love the neglected wife-impregnated-by-potent-virile-lover scenario. I'll see what I can cook up.

Writer2000Writer2000over 3 years ago

Simply superb! 5 stars plus from me. Extremely sexy and erotic. Alan, you are one of the best writers I have encountered on Literotica. I love your work. Don't stop writing.

alan9alan9almost 4 years agoAuthor
To Anonymous Paul in Okla

I see your point and it seems that, no matter how many times I proof what I've written, I can still find something that needs changing. Trouble is, when one decides to add detailed descriptions and facts to add color, errors occur without another pair of eyes to proof read every sentence. I found at least two inconsistencies today. I do this for enjoyment, to put my fantasies and streams of consciousness to paper, and to provide a little escape for others of the same inclination. Go Big Red!

Alan9

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
I DID NOT GET VERY FAR

...on my first alan9 story.

In paragraph one, we learn their wedding was last year, and that "they'd fuck like rabbits for the three or four days she was fertile." Assuming 10 months of marriage adds up to ca. 35 fucks, plus whatever more during her nonfertile time.

Inconsistently, three paragraphs later we read, "His dick had squirreled its way into Emily twelve times now since their wedding."

The same paragraph cites Kirk having a four-inch dick

-- another purposeful denigration by the author.

I quit.

No rating, since I did not read it.

Paul in Oklahoma

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