All Comments on 'A Syringe of Fun'

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ForestrunnerForestrunnerover 3 years ago
Great Story

Wow! Loved it. If this is your first story you have written, then I'm looking forward to more to come.

Excellent descriptions and I need a Part 2 now. You have a new fan.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

The overuse of "For her/his part" ruined this for me

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