All Comments on 'A T-Girl and a Tomboy Pt. 03'

Beautiful and well constructed. As always. Anxiously awaiting the next part.

Another incredible chapter. You really get the emotions to come through instead of just being words. I love everything about this story and look forward to everything you write.

Thank you for all the time and effort and of course the imagination to create such a wonderful story.

Loving the whole series. Can't wait for part 4!!

Another thing: I commend you on writing a crossdressing story that is not a sissy story. There aren't that many of those around.Just what I wanted.

I'm really impressed with the quality of writing and the complexity of the story. It's a perfect blend of wild sex and a plot that works to unfold, not only the physical lives of the characters, but also gives insights into their emotions, motivations and thoughts. Like 'acrasoft' said below; This is more than just another 'sissy story' — it follows an arc moving forward of the several interesting characters. Well done and deserving of the rating IMO. PS: Loved the last part where Leilani reveals her truth ;)

I really appreciate your attention to detail during the action scenes in your story - I don’t know much about surfing but I can visualize all of the runs, same with the choreography for the squad. It also enhances the sex scenes - really well done. Looking forward to the conclusion of this story and perhaps more with the same characters!

It's very validating to hear from you. I'm still new at writing. All of my works are published here on Lit, and I'm learning as I go. This story has really taken on a life of it's own. Part 4 will be the end of this series, but I have fallen for so many of the characters... I'm considering creating related short stories, little pieces of future adventures or side stories. Maybe things like: Shawna and her new girlfriend, trips to national competitions, lots of other ideas I won't spoil before part 4...

Is there anything else you'd like to know about the characters?

AB

Fantastic storyline. Not your usual run of the mill story. Great backgrounds to each character. You descriptions of each scene is amazing. Can't wait for part 4.Would be a shame to lose the characters in the future, so little side story's of the same calibre would be amazing! Just don't lose the characters persona in future stories! ❤️

Wow, just wow. This is such a great story! I like how it involves sex, but is not over the top sexual. Good story arc, characters and damn do I love to be alex

I have been waiting so eagerly for this chapter! This is easily my favorite erotic story that I've ever read (and I've been reading for -years-) and I'll be sad when its over but I look forward to seeing what else you write.

Thank you for putting this out here for us to read!!

I love stories like yours and this one is great. Its slow and gentle. No rush, well written.

Thank you.

Seriously looking forward to part 4!

Alex, this is seriously among the best stories I've read on literotica. I'm really looking forward to the last chapter but you should be incredibly proud of what you have written so far.

Alex, I absolutely love the story so far. I can't wait to read part 4 tonight. You are just spectacular in your blend of realism and fantasy.

This line right here, "I'm beginning to understand that the more I cross traditional gender roles, the more comfortable I am in my body." is essential for growth. Feel free to substitute your own 'demons' for 'traditional gender roles'.

I'm loving your story-telling, and this story is amazing.

Thanks.

This story is very nice. I loved your writing style and it is very nice I love this very much. I am posting my comment for first time on this site.

See review of part 1.