by Thors_Fist
Thanks for another fabulous chapter, TF! Janet has really turned a corner and Stephanie is a delicious work in progress. Love how you keep things new and exciting with new characters and fun wrinkles.
I'm happy that there are shorter times between chapters now. There really wasn't much else you could improve on.
I hope Janet does become Chen's slave, but 1st she needs a night as the 'poker prize'. 😁😈
On lesbian sex scenes. Most guys don’t do them well. Your stories always have more of a human element to them with characters and plot development than most I read here. Always happy to find a new chapter!
Deep throating flesh is completely different to trying to deep throat a dildo or vibrator. The same applies if the dildo is silicone and flexible because it’s still worlds away from deep throating a real cock. I know I’ve never been able to properly deep throat any kind of dildo, flesh on flesh is more of a natural merging. It’s the only part of this chapter that didn’t ring true. Of course it wasn’t enough to drop from 5 stars 😉
Tess (UK)
Second time thru. . . .Once JULIA has recovered from giving birth, I would like to see her get a day's worth of punishment from MASTER. He really needs to take charge and remind her who is boss. Right now, she is really running the show. Once the wife, always the wife ?
Your writing is so consistently good and on target at every corner. I am such a fanboy. Another 5 star chapter.
OK, I've got to comment on safe working practices; safe D/s practices have been treated as important in this story, which is very good and to be expected.
Naked people doing woodworking is not safe; safety footwear is required - making bed frames, at least some bits of wood will be heavy enough to seriously damage unprotected feet if dropped on them. I presume most people know how painful it is to step on a Lego barefoot? Plenty of similar-sized offcuts on the floor in a woodwork shop, too.
TF mentions sanding wood fairly frequently; wood dust should not be inhaled, so dust masks should be mandatory. At least naked people have no loose clothing to catch in machinery, so that's a plus.
This is probably the fifth or sixth time of reading, finally had to comment, as it's niggled at me every time. OK, only half-serious I suppose, and it's only a fantasy, but it keeps pulling me out of the story.
5* every chapter, thanks for sharing
Dixon (UK)