All Comments on 'A Taste of Stockholm in Mexico'

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MyBareTorsoMyBareTorso12 months ago

Great story! Very well written, with an excellent sense of tension, and wonderfully sexy too. Thanks for writing! 🙏

44chicken44chicken12 months ago

Nice story. Well written. Perhaps a bit too "nice" though. I never go the sense that the narrator was afraid, nor did he seem to have a strong reaction, good or bad, to being used/raped. I get that was kind of the point, but overall I felt a lack of intensity. Still, enjoyed it and will check out your other stories. Thanks!

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