All Comments on 'A Tempting Vacation Ch. 21'

Finally, jack! Been waiting for this moment for ten years. I thought Pam was never going to make Ron cum after the last chapter, and that thought was VERY disappointing.

But it finally happened! Thank you, jack.

So good! Waited years for Pam to do this to Ron. Keep the chapters coming! Best story around.

I’d reconciled myself to this series being at an end. How amazing to have another instalment, and such a delightfully hot one at that. There’s nothing else on Lit comes close…many thanks

YES! Well worth the wait, but don't make us wait so long for the next chapter!

I've waited anxiously for this next chapter. This is wonderful fun and the final revalations should be wonderfully kinky. Very erotic and wonderfully written. Now get back to work on the next chapter.

Every story in this series has received higher than a 4.5 rating. Wow! Thank you for your creativity, skill, and hard work.

Great to have you back. Can't wait to see what happens next

Five stars once again. This is the best tease series EVER.

Absolutely fantastic chapter as usual. Been reading for 20 years… hopefully there’s a new chapter soon!

Loved it but am curious as to IF you will get all 4 involved. soon?

Omg yesssssss! A new chapter!! Time to reread from the beginning for the millionth time!

Hello everyone in 2023! ;)

See you all again in....2025?

A retelling of the Sue story from the mouth of Ron instead of the narrator??? Genius and perfectly paired with the best double "non" handjob ever. Take a bow, author.

Nice chapter

Still thinking what Pam and Amy did with Mike between chapters 10 and 15. Clearly Pam could have gotten inspired by her friend Beth in tormenting her ex husband and showing him what he was missing. Amy would naturally play along hoping for a reconciliation and perhaps the fulfillment of some long hidden daddy desire.

you definitely need to keep writing these

Jack you magnificent bastard you did it again. Take all the time you need, you can’t rush art.

Great chapter, thanks for your efforts and all the good time the story gives us. It definitely should be shot as a movie.

With the day still to play for before Amy's return, I hope chapter 22 is titled: Ron carries out a plan designed to protect Amy's virginity. :)

Love this story so much.

Well worth the wait.

Please give us more

The only problem with this outstanding series is waiting for the next chapter! Chapter 21 is one of the best, and it is hard to wait in order to find out about what will happen with Amy. (Those who have just stumbled across this chapter must read A Tempting Vacation from chapter one to make sense of it and to properly appreciate it). Five stars for this chapter, to go with Five stars for the author.

The question is how much longer do we have to wait

So, Pam thinks Beth doesn’t know what happened, but of course Beth does. Does Beth play dumb with Pam? Does she tell Ron she knows? Lots of good storyline possibilities. We’ll find out in 2024 (I hope!)

It's only appropriate that Pam and Ron consummate.

What an awesome chapter. I love how you put Pam into a position where *she* really wanted this to happen by spurring a sense of jealousy or at least competition with Sue. The double handjob was great, as was the idea of Pam really playing with all that cum on his cock, and then particularly the fact that he came all over her chest. Clearly things can only go farther from here. I would never have imagined this chapter taking place like this and look forward to more of your unpredictable creativity in the following chapters!

Incredible update. Can't believe it's been over 10 years and I'm still reading this saga. To think others have been reading this nearly 20 years come December 2023 is astounding. Keep up the good work.

Thought at one point Pam would need to use her own "cleanser" to clean the stubborn stain

Hot entry. Keep them coming.

Thank you for another exciting update. I hope the story continues.

Who do you guys think would play the characters in the Tempting Vacation Cinematic Universe?

When this series began, there was no YouTube. The first iPhone was still years away, and Pope John Paul II was still the Pope. I absolutely love this series, but can it wrap up before another 20 years comes and goes?

Happy 20th anniversary to the start of this series! Jack can we get a teaser / new story today?

Excellent series. 20 years this December...wow. Awesome work.

Any chance for a chapter commemorating this milestone?

anymore updates, please

That final image of Pam with Ron’s cum dripping down her face and body…wow. Such an earned climax, so to speak. And yet more to come (again, so to speak, sorry!). But damn, so amazingly alluring of an image to finally read after all this time.

Anything soon, Jack?

It's kind of funny to think about how if Ron got any of these women pregnant in the same year part one of this series came out, then those children would now be fully grown adults able to drive, smoke, vote, fuck, and even drink in some countries.

The one month of the year in which an episode hasn’t dropped is September…maybe that’s a clue in the Tempting Vacation treasure hunt that fans have been living for 20 years! Thanks Jack, my (extensive) research suggests this is probably the best series on Lit by a country mile. 😃

Any chance of an update on the update, Jack?