All Comments on 'A Threesome for Two'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Nice. Very hot. Love to hear the next phase of the girls relationship.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

The grammar threw me off. Pretty hot story but please get future stories proof read before submitting

Elaine_MatureElaine_Matureover 1 year ago

Wonderfully intense, desperate and urgent. Never mind grammar; I was swept along by the prose! Good job!

Masturbationqueen1972Masturbationqueen1972about 1 year ago

Intense… waiting for part two..

Beejay3Beejay39 months ago

A growing awareness to where her pleasure lay..it’s obvious where they were to continue!.

Thanks..a nice beginning of a new friendship

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Hot

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Hello everyone! My name is Sarah Sterntal, I'm a 31 years old, bisexual, woman from Germany. After spending some time as a freelance writer, I decided to branch out into more exciting directions. Here I publish erotic short stories fueled by a mix of experience and fantasy. I...