All Comments on 'A Trip to Remember Ch. 01'

Very well done. You portray so well all the little visual details, sounds, scents, touches, and even proprioceptive awarenesses that add up to arousal. Daniel's palpation of Cora's shoulder to illustrate some of the muscular concerns he sees in the clinic will have to go down as one of the best pick-up maneuvers ever. Thanks for sharing. I hope you keep writing.

Definitely need more.

Absolutely, lots of promise here. You’ve set up a group who are very good with their hands… do us a favour though and let the boss get lucky!