All Comments on 'A True Surprise'

Great start but you left us hanging. More please

Where's the rest of the story?

Great story so far. However, I've got a major case of blue balls.

Great story so far, however , I've got a major case of blue balls. Please continue.

are you going to continue with more of the story?

What Frankie said. This has the promise of a hot, lengthy story. 5/5 stars.

Dewey Cheatham

Keep going!!!

i70. Wichita. Hmm... As someone from Kansas, I'm curious where this goes!

Please continue.

I don't get the favorable comments below - this is truly appalling! (Gave it a 1, but would have gone with a zero if it was possible)

Short, but it has possibilities. The reactions of the characters seem realistic enough. But I'm not sure what I feel about the sister turning to prostitution. 3/5

Great for a first-time author!!! I gave this a 5 because it is a well told story, and because this story does need to continue. I hope his sister has an extremely hairy pussy when he gets it. Like most men, I am not into shaved, razor burn, stubble and pimples from ingrown hairs on what should be a hairy pussy mound! Hopeful to give another 5 in the next story.

Re: anon hairy. No, you mean you are not into bald pussies. Many men like the bush, and that is fine. But if you want to make generalties like that, I'd bet most men like a shaved, or at least, a well trimmed, pussy. The majority of movies and stories wouldn't feature so many bald pussies if it wasn't well liked. By all means, like thick bushes if you wish. That's your prerogative. But stop with the 'most men like hairy pussy' complaint. It's simply not true.