All Comments on 'A Valentine Present'

this was the best story i have read in a long time and very well told i felt like i was right there and could fill my pussy gitting wet as the ladys in the story

It got me wet just like a ll the rest of your stories and audios...You are sooo talented and I thank you for sharing. Keep 'em cumming!!!

Utterly delightful, but I got stopped several times by things like:

It did not effect the results at all.

Effect is cause, affect is modify. Would that automatic mechanisms would point out the right their/they're/there and lose versus loose, but they don't yet do that. Too bad.

This is a juicy tale - both the tale and me. Great work please start again in '06

Oh gawd, could you do that to me sometime? That's the kind of story that gets me sooooooooo hot!

I enjoyed every bit of this story it got me extremely aroused, although i did get a bit confused when the names got mixed up, and it went from both of them wearing jeans to lisa wearing a skirt, but screw that, the story was FANTASTIC 10/10

Little story! It didn't arouse me like some of the other stories, but the concept is intriging.

Very erotic.

Good eroticism, but check out the little details before posting.

Was good, but i was hoping for a threesome. Next chapter?

I did enjoy this story very much. It would be a better world if everyone could have mind blowing orgasms every time. Glad you like tall women, I'm 5' 6", and love to wear high heels. Most stories that men write make their women short. Anyway, I'm new to Literotica and love reading about mind control, can't wait to read and listen to your other stories.

You've interchanged Sara and Lisa a few times. Wishful thinking? :)

I was hoping while Sara was under, the hypnotist would be the one enjoying her body... Geez, she's lying on the floor naked, legs spread wide open and inviting.... how could a guy turn that down -- she could have been led to believe it was Chad doing it too.... maybe while Chad enjoyed Lisa..... Just sayin'

Over all it was okay. Not terrific, but okay. It was very jerky and not a lot of reaction from the characters. There should be more emotion and description.

These stories are so good. I will be reading each of the others you wrote according to the dates you wrote them. I would not want to miss any opportunity to learn more.

Please keep writing

The author confuses the names of his main characters frequently--sometimes in the same paragraph. Makes me think this was copied and poorly revised in effort to disguise the plagiarism. Perhaps author was merely typing incredibly fast and then didn't proofread before posting.

I love how the slowly make control happened

I came across this story and decided to read. It is a great story and it has a nice build-up. I like how the characters were described as I could see them in my mind.

I hope there will be chapter 2 in this story as I would like to know, what happens next? Will there be new hypnoses like being excited to do it deep in the park or the beach? If so, will be very excited to read.

Thanks again for writing this very interesting story and please, keep writing!

A great story of helping a female colleague and her husband to be have the best orgasm in their lives. Loved it.

Great story. I wished I was there. 🙂

Apsalutly awesome