All Comments on 'A Very Friendly Neighborhood Ch. 01'

My 2 cents

A good start for this story. I like the characters and the story line. I look forward to reading more. Thanks for your time and imagination.

Title says Steve and the character is named Marshall

Without anal, it's a five.

The short description does say Steve. I must have either been thinking of the Stevens or another story. I'll try to get a correction submitted.

Nice and simple harem concept for many MANY chapters worth of material. And I was surprised that not only u brilought up blackmail and some actual controversial issues, but did them in a believable way without looking stupid. I only hope that u don't get too too serious and forget this is a porn story

Thank you! I do have lots of plans for where this will go, and I'm going you will continue to like it.

I am glad you liked the balance of believability and erotic fantasy. My goal on most of my work is to find the sweet spot where it is realistic enough to be believable and fantastic enough to be erotic and amazing.

Really appreciate the comment. Comments and reactions like this are why I started posting my stories. I couldn't tell if my writing was good, or just shit I was proud of because of a armature writer's delusion of competence. Thus far, most of my responses have been positive and the ones that weren't were either misguided or a matter of taste.

Thanks again. Working on chapter 2.

...anal. Completely unnecessary.

A good, sexy blackmail story.

I stopped in the meal, when you wrote of "pictures", but I think meant "pitchers"!!!

Enjoyable and witty can't wait until I start the following chapters

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