All Comments on 'A Very Naked Interview'

Nice first story. Very erotic, short and yet dynamic.

good, simple, fast read - the visuals were good, I wished I was there watching in person

It was well-written, but I would have liked a little background. Why was she there?

This didn't make a lot of sense without context. Was she doing this for money, a dare or a secret thrill? Was the interview going to be broadcast? It really needs to be fleshed out.

The interview sequence was certainly hot. But how in the world did she get into this situation? I don't think I missed any related chapters, so it leaves me wondering. .n was she blackmailed? Why was she doing this and what sort of TV show was it supposed to be?

I agree with the others. The point of erotica is to tell a story, not script a sex scene. You need a backstory to sell the main event. Especially here. There are two essential components to the making of any reluctance/forced story - (1) the victim does not want to do it (2) there is something that made them do it anyway. Still, no explanation is better than a botched explanation, so this isn't a complete letdown.