All Comments on 'A Very Shameful Punishment Ch. 02'

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KonyhaKonyhaover 14 years ago
Uncertain about the world building

Great story telling and delighted to see the second chapter in this series. Having said that, Allowing Eleanor to witness Gail’s punishment seems odd to me. Eleanor’s punishment was quite rightly independent of Gail and determined by the court. Further, Eleanor’s adherence was ensured by monthly visits with her correctional officer.

While Gail’s claims were deemed frivolous the rationale of Eleanor hanging about to witness Rose and Gail’s punishment escapes me – especially in a society that penalizes women who disgrace other women. This likely detracts from the humiliation aspect; still, such an allowance seems counter to justice and pride a society such as seems to value.

terrynterrynabout 12 years ago
a very shamefull punishment 02

Leslie

wow i love the ending the two complainents and of course the lawyer. got hers also and i hope Gail heals and gets herself fucked at a motorcycle clubhouse from some big cocks

Terry

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Brilliant, I Loved Chapter-2,,, Yes!

Hallo Leslie!

Beautifully written!.... Brilliant, hot and sexy.... I just loved the idea of Eleanor witnessing, Rose and Gail’s punishment, and Rose getting 3 whip lashes, between her legs was brutal, and a very nice start.... Myself however, I would have gIven Rose, 10 whip lashes to her pussy, and the option of thanking me by eating my pussy, or 20 more lashes.. 😋

Thank-you.... 5-Stars and 5-Hot Wet Orgasms..

Your kinky dyke friend,

Gay Kat.

jmkuehnjmkuehnabout 5 years ago
Interesting

Still if she has been in a relationship for some time it seems odd that you skipped over that. He ass and mouth remained open for business and there was nothing in her punishment that precluded her from using thema

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Confused just a bit

Eleanor could have used her mouth and ass for sexual relief during the year. It would not have been too hard to explore that part. When Gail's husband was banished to an undesirable town....so what! Gail was still married but I guess somewhere along the way they were divorced? In that period I would assume that he had to pay a lot to Gail but maybe not since women were supposed to stand on their own two feet. What about the red marks on Gail's ass? Where did those come from and not brought into question at the sentencing? Was Gail fooling around with someone? Interesting that Eleanor was given some ointment for the holes after the rings were cut off but nothing was given when they were put on. Oh well, there are many more chapters to read.

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