All Comments on 'A Viper's Nest Ch. 04'

I'm hooked. Waiting for the next part!

Glad you're enjoying it.

Last night I wrote 3k words, so if we assuming an average chapter is 10k words, then in one day I wrote a third of a chapter :P

However, Chapter Five might be a double-length chapter.

Cool story look foward to more

love the story looking forward to the next one keep up the good work

Thanks to you both.

Chapter Five already has 3k words and I hope it'll get completed by Sunday evening (unless it ends up being about 15-20k words).

Heh, completely unexpected. But a welcome surprise to everyone. Your writing is improving.

Keep up the good work!

Thanks.

Ew, should you get rid of the extra tits on the lupine females?

I stand corrected, apparently you did have the entire crew learn to speak English. Not sure that was just a simple and expedient way out of a problem or if it’s for a plot device reveal in a later chapter, probably the former.

As to the sex, even with John being into aliens, I’m still surprised by the similarities between human and viper. I would have thought the height differences alone would make some positions too hard to do let alone different anatomy requiring different positions. But it was good to read and the soft Domme by Thissa was interesting.

@JAFCritic

There’s a specific term that is something along the lines of “accidental evolution” where two races develop along similar routes and end up being similar yet still alien.

If you read SnekGuy’s Pinwheel stories, it’s mentioned in there.