All Comments on 'A: Visitor Pt. 12'

U can never understand what sort of genetic make up these sorry cucks are made of.. who thrive on having their spouses have sex with others and continue debasing themselves.. I pity them and hope that their miserable life is short so that they can be put out of their misery!

As a story it feels incomplete because although you wrote about his/her feelings they were not deep enough. I enjoyed it very much. But it did feel like you rushed it. But good writing. Forget the nobs endless criticism, they have no idea. They are the pathetic keyboard warriors with nothing better to do with their time than spout abuse …… k

Thank god this is the end.

Of course, the epilogue would have them divorcing and her taking the kids and leaving her husband in poverty and misery.

If this sort of story, which appears to often here on Literotica in my opinion, check to see who took your man card because you are not deserving of getting it back.

why is the stupid bastard still there should have divorced the slut long ago not kept the bitch just another whore and wimp story too many now

The idiots are not dying out, either in reality or in fantasy. This author and his story prove it!

there was a message from Lauren at 11:30pm that simply read, "Good night! I love you!"

And literally no one would believe that statement accept for the dudes dreaming of getting a cock of their own.

Seriously you are earning a long drawn out epic fail on this trash kid.

Sorry philaster, this is just another example of lousy cuck based writing. The woman gets to have her romp with another guy at the expense of her milk toast husband. Then she plays at being a "faithful" wife and "makes it up to him" because she returns home to her husband, which is where she should have been all along.

So chapter whatever...and now the slutwife returns and the husband gets to sample the wife again until she goes off and fucks someone else. The writer should write about how the husband has been having sex with another woman that way the balance is even. But i can imagine they won't. And the one sided cuckolding carries on.

Moronic story. So if all the fans of this silliness really think this is great stuff, please have their wives and girl friends send me their contact information and I will make their dreams come true.

6 comments, 1 says they like it. Pretty obvious this kind of disgusting cuck bullshit is playing to a very small audience. It really begs the question, " why is there so much of this crazy being produced?" The ratio of this shit to realistic fare that has a husband dumping a cheap tramp like Lauren and stomping a mud hole into her boyfriend is about 20:1. So judging by the 6 responses prior to mine, I would say the great majority of the readers of this site are being ignored

The reconnection was like a ruined orgasm. Totally not worth the effort. Near as I can tell the first stage involved the legally married husband being the bitch of the relationship taking care of the family, while her majesty the slut took a luxurious bath and nap. Then when it is time for his reward she plays mean mind games, uses his mouth and then rewards him with typical marital sex.

Granted the mindset of the cuck is not similar to a traditionally masculine man. So maybe the cucks thought this was a beautiful chapter proving that a man can whore his wife's body to a buddy for his own sexual gratification, and, that the wife will still respect and love him.

I know that the problem may be me, that I just do not get this kind of story. BUT FOR ANY OTHER GENRE, this is an unequal relationship, indicating serious problems in the relationship. One of the red flags is that the husband was "rewarded" with that which was expected of a spouse since day 1 of the marriage.

Cancer

Now I think you need do were he makes her a Cuckqueen for the weekend balance your story that's would be a great twist

Ignore the insecure assholes. Great job with the story a s helping the couple find their intimacy.

just another whore and wimp shit story too many now belongs in the garbage must be a man hating lesbian to write this crap

He needs to have his own visitor REVENGE

I enjoyed this story, the cuck wasn't a sissy, just a guy who wanted his wife to have some fun, have a big O or two. I happen to think you write well too.

Perhaps some of your critics could let us read something they had the courage to post someplace? Just asking...

Thank you for sharing, five stars for all of it, Jackie

“Now you get your turn” is all I need to read to know this is another man hating tale. Useless

CRAP! No MAN would allow that bullshit! Apparently that's what's in your twisted mind...

You could have put all this on one page and wipp yo asshole with.

Would have been a better drivel. Guarantee!

Captcha

What a crock of shit!

CONGRATULATIONS!!!!!

...for this EXCELLENT story!!!!!

I would love if chapters could be a bit longer, but I love them and your style!!! Please go on!!!

Looking forward more teasing and control and maybe denial from her ;)

Loved the story. But would’ve loved to hear what she did with here lover.

This story had a few moments but basically was shit. Clearly a 1

Yet another pathetic cuck story.

Such an absolute bag of bullshit, I'd say but...bullshit has some value. Not so with this piece of tripe. LP

Dont worry about the negative comments. I thought it was a well written story, and a fun ride. Of course we would all like a follow up, including what she did with her lover.

I have been thru this and i thought you captured the feelings perfectly