All Comments on 'A Walk in the Winter??'

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DrmaxcDrmaxcover 3 years ago
Great start, but...

Great start. Super premise. Thought the start of the walk could have been taken rather more slowly but generally the whole scene setting was simply excellent. Delighted by the old farmhouse being the goal, but I could not quite believe you then went for arse fucking! What girl is going to really think on a cold day, far from home and plentiful warmth and lubrication that it is just the moment to try that? That spoilt what was looking an excellent story for me!

'Cute butt?' Does Chrissie come from the US?

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