All Comments on 'A Walk in the Woods'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Fun story

Many shy young men can be helped by an understanding older woman. More mother's should take initiative to help. It is good if a friend or aunt can help.

kuellarkuellarover 11 years ago
Enjoyable

An interesting, well-written tale - I suppose there are plenty of places it could have gone, but you chose to keep it light and "healthy" (nothing like the femdom humiliation one might otherwise expect). An enjoyable read :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Boring

Nothing interesting happened. You needed something like the cheerleading squad "unexpectedly" shows up (because the woman tipped them in advance), takes pictures, and blackmails him, or somehow his clothes "accidentally" fall down a well, and he has to go back wearing a blanket, or something.

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