All Comments on 'A Wedding on the Lake Ch. 03'

Well the Laura thing was a plot twist! Interested to see where you take this!

*chefs kiss*

Really loving how you're expanding on the sex magic. Can't wait to see what come next.

Eh. Could have done without Laura. She dumps Will (for not horrible reasons) then go psycho, I'd have been good without seeing her again. If you write in a different style, it might work, but in the minimal plot maximum sex style you favor, it's not important.

With a fabulous array of characters, excellent writing, and a truly engaging storyline, this third chapter is really part of a larger story which should be read first (as the author has explained in the introduction). While this reviewer is no fan of the MM activity in the story, there is no question as the the author's talent, the excellence of the writing, or the overall quality of the storyline. Five stars.

When is the next installment of this series? I neeeeeeeeeeeeeed it lol.

Please continue. So good!!!!!!