All Comments on 'A Weekend Adventure Ch. 01'

by LoganFC23

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49WIZARD8849WIZARD88over 3 years ago
Next Chapter

I definitely can't wait until the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Superb storytelling

Obviously unfinished, this great story leaves the reader wondering if mere erotic coupling will blossom into true Romance- or not. A Weekend Adventure needs to be continued, and one can only hope that it will turn out to be even more than a mere weekend adventure. Five stars!

49WIZARD8849WIZARD88over 3 years ago
Part 2

When is part 2 coming out? Looking forward what Bella and Johnny does next

LoganFC23LoganFC23over 3 years agoAuthor
@49WIZARD88 Part 2

Appreciate you enjoying Ch 01. Chapter 02 is mostly written and I’m in the middle of writing Chapter 03. Need to review/edit Chapter 02. Everything has been planned/outlined out, just need time to write some more.. life and work has got in the way.

49WIZARD8849WIZARD88over 3 years ago
@ LoganFC

Man take your time. I appreciate the response. You have a Chapter 3 planned? I already the next two chapters will be just as good as the first

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Great Writing

Great writing. Very descriptive and erotic. Looks like you’ve been ‘shadowing’ another great writer of this genre.

It would be great if you could add in some more build-up in your next chapters but aside from that this first chapter is excellent.

Keep it up! 5 stars

chaoschaoschaoschaoschaoschaosabout 1 year ago

Excellent story in the all-too-rare cheating genre. Please keep up the great work.

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Update 23-July-2021: Hi everyone, just a quick update here. I am on hiatus from writing as I have had to deal with my personal health. Things are getting better everyday and I will write, once again. I just don't know when is all A lot of you have reached out about A Weekend...

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