All Comments on 'A Weekend Away Pt. 03'

This chapel was going pretty well until the section dealing with the Iron Maiden, that’s just a hard NO, it’s all kinds of stupid. Any degree of fatigue is likely to cause severe injury or potential death by bleeding out. No chance to safe-word at all if the sub is choking on a dildo (as per the obvious lead in of her aggressive gag reflex) or even if the sub gets a cramp / muscle spasms.

The perspective of the narrative is still painfully clumsy but presumably that’s due to chapters 2 & 3 already working their way through the upload and authorisation process. Short chapters can be a disappointing factor for readers but you seem to be handling this pretty well by rapid submissions.

Tess (uk)