by bearmad1963
excellent chapter...Can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter. will Kay beat Lazio
I won't lie, I'm not a fan of abuse in any way, shape, or form, but I thought you used it well in the context of your story and it truly did add to story line and where you're heading. I love your story and hope you'll be posting more, and soon!
I did enjoy this chapter, I am ready for Sally to be rescued. NO one should suffer that kind of abuse.Lazlo needs to be dealt with immediately but the story is really good. keep up the good work.
i'm amazed at how far you have come as a writer an look forward to further chapters. your story is wonderful. I cant wait to see where you take it next. keep up the excelent work!
I loved this chapter! One of the best ones yet! I cant wait to see where this goes!
and very very soon - do not make us wait so long as the last time - I look daily for your next chapter.
Great story so far and I'm waiting to read the rest of it. As per comments from the others, please don't let a lot of time lapse between chapters. I just can't wait to find out what happens next with Kay, Bradley and the others, trying to overpower Lazlo. Like Lazlo's victums, maybe he needs to be sexually tortured (and then killed). That was just a though. Keep up the great work!!
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Hi everyone, I have just sent chapter 11 to my editor as I finished writing it today. I'm sorry it has taken me a long time to finish this chapter but I have been unwell and in hospital for two weeks. I'm a lot better now thank goodness. So depending on when my editor sends back the chapter and what alterations will need to be done. Chapter 11 should be on line very soon. Thanks for your continued support. From Kay
that i'm glad that you are feeling better.
I posted Chapter 11 today. So hopefully it should be online in the next few days. Thanks to all those of you that have sent me private messages.
I can see how your writing evolvws from reading from chapter 1 to now and sometimes the incorrect word usage is funny if not hillarious but it does distract from the story some. Keep writing though as it is an excilent story
I have been told by a few of my readers that my work is been copied and used in other stories.
I have now transferred all of my story to wattpad. I'm sick of people copying my story and using it.
My watt pad name is bearmad50 this is the link for you.
https://www.wattpad.com/user/bearmad50
I have posted chapters 1 - 14 on that sight. Please come and check it out. I will no longer be posing this story here. Bye thanks for all your support over the years. From Kay.
My new wattpad name is bearmad50kayclarke. Come and join me.
Im not sure if I missed something or not, but at the beginning she had no idea who her parents were. Now in this chapter she seemed to know a lot about her mothers pride and that stuff they put on the boys privates.....just wondering if she didnt know her mother how does she know of her mothers hate of bullies?