All Comments on 'A Wife and the Waitress'

The story has a good basic idea. However (you knew that was coming), the author needs to work with someone to polish the story. The story comes across as very choppy. Sorry Tony, but the story reads like a first draft.

Needs a part 2 sorted if ended really fast needed more polish and work

I liked it very much. I relate to it because I often fantasized with my husband about having my first bisexual experience. It happened while we were on a Princess Cruise. The other woman was one of the ship's entertainers. It was a glorious four nights.

Thanks for writing!

Great quick-read, hot!