All Comments on 'A Wife's Tail'

Will Tom join in next month? Hope there is more to cum.

Good story. Was the use of "tail" instead of tale in the title intentional?

Hubby needed to go down on her and clean her up

Well written but somewhat unbelievable. Why doesn't the husband simply pimp his wife and make some money with her? What purpose do they really serve each other now if Eric is more perfect? This reads as if it was from a female perspective.

Good story, but just a little too sparse/short. Try taking a little more time to be more descriptive. But I'll still give it a 5.

Really AWFUL!

Epilogue: After six months of fucking Erik, Betty realized she was married to a sissy wimp, a pathetic loser. The fact he was turned on by giving her away instead of cherishing her made her angry and resentful. She lost all respect for the loser and took him to the cleaners in the divorce. Then she went out and found a real man who she admired and respected. One who refused to share, but rocked her world. Tom spent most nights crying. When Betty thought about this she laughed and laughed wondering what she ever saw in the little boi in the first place.

I liked that you tried to show and not tell. That unusual on Literotica. Tale not Tail. Improve your use of tense. Using present tense for the past is confusing. In fact, writing any fiction in the present tense is difficult, especially present perfect. Too much present perfect always feels weird. Add a few more transitional phrases. Don’t get in the rutted of using adverbs to modify as a way to avoid passive voice. Strong active voice moves the story along. Simply use stronger more descriptive verbs. You did a great job. I wish I could do as well when I first tried fiction

Penny, that was Awful.

At least it was fairly short.

More, please!

Absolutely perfect story for us cuckolds❤️ Would love to hear part 2 and more adventures!

I was lucky enough to have a slutty gf in college. My roommate was regularly fucking her and he shared her with his friends. Wish my wife was like her lol.

Ruined it with the butt play.

This was very erotic. It was to,d in a way that added to the intensity. Very sexy indeed.

I enjoyed this a lot. I can’t wait for my husband to get home to share it with him.

My wife has a fuck buddy. He is a regional manger for her company. He visits her office about every six weeks. Each visit lasts three days. During that time, she stays each night at his hotel. It’s so hot waiting for her to return. It drives me crazy but it’s the hottest thing for our marriage. We have so much sex following his visits. Then we enjoy finding new lingerie for her to wear for his next one.

Wife’s tail or tale, either way it sucked.

Loved the story .I wanked myself off after I read it .Thank you very much

26thNC at it again. You have never like a single cuckold story yet you always come to complain how bad they are. You would think one would but two and two together. Stop reading these stories if you don't like them. No one wants to hear how your wife left you and how depressed you are about it. Move on and get a life.

Imagine just how fucked up life on this planet would be if it was like this story?

Awful.

Loved your story. 5 Stars. Keep writing. Don't let the haters get you down. Even if you tell them not to read they do and leave nasty comments. I see the ugly cyberstalker 26thNC has left his short nasty comment as he always does. Has anyone else checked out his profile to find he has a total of ZERO stories? But almost every day he comes by to cut up stories of hot wives telling sexy stories they share.

People always complain about cuck stories as if they didn't willingly press on it and read it like??

Yuk!

Can't speak for all men, but a large pctg of us fantasize about having a wife and relationship like this, so long as she affirms her husband, too. After all, she came home for SOME reason.

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But she won't. Because this fantasy is all about angst, and tarnishing something that was precious.

Fantastic.more please

Ah so the skank whore gets to fuck around and the cuck loves it. I guess being brain dead and being humiliated and degraded is every day for cucks.

Very hot Femdom agitprop wife and a cuck. Enjoyed it.

Not my scene, I didn't like it at all.

Brilliant!!! Just how I like it!!!

So damn hot. My girl got asked to do some nude modeling, but she was only 17 at the time. I tried to get her to lie and do it anyway.

Great story. Love her honesty and freedom and his total acceptance. Perfect relationship.

No first generation Sicilian girl would be called "Betty".

Very enjoyable. Very arousing. My kind of story.

Enjoyed your erotic story, thank you. Just noticed in the comments more people have picked up on 26thNC's totally pathetic rantings. I have suggested to him that he could spend his time in charity shops or soup kitchens helping other less fortunate people than himself. I guess he will say how could he do that as he is in a wheelchair. A friend of mine did it after being paralysed in a motor bike accident. Sadly cancer took him away from us. Keep up the good work with your writing, will now read the next part. Mel B known as Hornydevil47

Tym którym to się podoba polecam wizytę u seksuologa. Coz z ich psychika jest nie tak. Ale widocznie też tacy są.

Very erotic