by ddMcAnn
What thoroughly unlikable characters. Both weak with no drive. Their spouses will be better off without them.
Yes, Anonymous, there is more to come.
Hindsight2020, I am thinking that one of the spouses descriptions fit you...and that maybe you have never had to sacrifice anything in your relationship....Maybe instead of being a hater, you should give positive criticism, like a suggestion to make my characters less "unlikable."
I think you may have misread the first comment. Their spouses were loosers, and they would be better off without them. Good story, waiting for the next installment.
I thoroughly enjoyed this story. How rare these days to find a story where two sexual equals meet and really enjoy each other. I look forward to the next instalment.
I'm already working on the next segment of this story. Thanks for the feedback. Thank you Anonymous for clarifying the previous comment.