All Comments on 'A Wolf's Rage Ch. 11'

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such a good friend

And the story is ruined

I wondered at the storycodes on SOL, and bounced. After getting curious and reading this, it's clear that the protagonist isn't intended to be in any way likeable to normal people with a shred of basic integrity or honor. He just betrayed his closest friend and ripped his heart to shreds...for teh lulz. What a cancerous excuse for a main character. No loyalty, no integrity, no honor, just a dick with legs, essentially. And the exultation in the agony of his best friend makes it clear this is also an untagged sadism fetish story. Understood.

Cucking nasty, bad dudes is one thing. Innocent strangers isn't awesome but still different. Betraying and torturing your dearest friends is a whole nother level of despicable and reprehensible, to me.

Not for me.

Absolute power corrupts absolutely...hope there's some humility in his future or someone stronger is gonna kick the shit out of him. Way of the world.

Totally agree with anubelore

Agree with previous commenters. Story ruined. It's everything Gary "held" dear not "holds" dear. Get your tenses straight while you're ruining your story and making your readers hate your main character. 1*

I do not favor chapters where Matt cucks straight innocent male spouses or significant others. It's humiliating and demeaning.

G

I do not favor chapters where Matt cucks straight innocent male spouses or significant others. It's humiliating and demeaning.

G

Still awesome but don't care for the 2 page chapters 5 stars!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Matt needs to make this right by his friend, somehow, or at least try.

This chapter was a real down-turn.

Either werewolves are inherently evil/ narcissistic/ whatever, or Matt was already an asshole, and now the werewolf bite has made him a strong, powerful, immortal asshole.

Adding a hot, young, happy, woman to the harem or pack? Awesome!

Being a total asshole to your best friend... ugh!

Gonna re-evaluate the character arc here. If it's just sex, sex, sex, self-centered sex, asshole MC, then....