All Comments on 'A Work Break'

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CreeperclawCreeperclaw4 months ago

Not too sure that Luna will go to jail after this, might be that they end up fuck buddies.

ZambonilordZambonilord4 months ago

Well that was unexpected. I was anticipating Luna fucking the main character but some random homeless guy does it then vanishes. A sequel would be interesting to see. Maybe the Main character said nothing to anyone about Luna. And they never found the homeless man. But now She's pregnant and Luna fucks her on the regular?

Bullrider14Bullrider144 months ago

I think luna should go to jail I’m ok with how most of the story was but Luna should have to pay a price.. and I’m really surprised no one got worried where their boss was and didn’t come look for her. Maybe she become dominant and dominates Luna

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