All Comments on 'Abducted Ch. 03'

by Br0kenD0ll

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WhackdoodleWhackdoodlealmost 2 years ago

You’ve done a pretty good job but you continue to make the same goddamn bullshit mistake every fucking wannabe rapist on this site makes: the female victims have the biggest orgasm of their lives.

FUCK YOURSELF WITH A BASEBALL BAT, NO LUBE, AND STOP WHEN YOU CUM!

Part of the breaking is that sex hurts. It doesn’t feel good. Everytime he fucks her, it’s not her pleasure that’s important, it’s his. She begins to associate sex for him and she is just a fleshlight and she learns to give him what he wants.

Dont ruin your story with bullshit about her having an orgasm when there is no way she would. What she will get is a yeast infection, a uti, but at no point will she cum from the unwanted, terror filled and brutal rape.

AngelRiderAngelRideralmost 2 years ago

God you are demented

MasterfuljimMasterfuljimalmost 2 years ago

I’m with you doodle but unfortunately Lit doesn’t do dark :-((

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

shut up fucktard

MasterMigorianMasterMigorianalmost 2 years ago

I wonder how many of you people who yell and rage behind the tag of "Anonymous" have ever put yourself out there and written? Also, if you hate the story so much, tell me again why you're following it and continuing to read? If you don't like the story please don't read it, but do not shit on someone's work just because you disagree.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I said fucktard to that guy named Whackdoodle

I like your stories, sorry for making you upset

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I like your story, I am looking forward to the next part! ^.^

Mona

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Omg I need the next part!! I'm invested. I love your stories BTW ❤️

doorknob22doorknob227 months ago

Hot stuff. Great story!

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