All Comments on 'Abduction No. 07'

Looks to me like the story will be 99% her getting raped and 1% the bad guys getting theirs

So the winner is???

How about three chapters of the bad guys getting their balls blown off, their cocks cut off and then they being shoved up about 18 inches into their shithole.

That would be a proper ending

But too easy on most rapists

This is the first story of yours that I have read, but I am rather impressed with it. You show remarkable attention to detail, add sexy bits like her near incest with her dad, and show the intense reaction of the parents and the woman herself to her rape. It is evident that she enjoys the sex to some extent, but doesn't like the rape part, which is realistic too. It doesn't mean consent, but it does mean that some might mistake it for consent. Snake is clearly a smart and ruthless man, plus the gangbang was very stimulating. You did a very interesting and arousing story in 2 pages, with a real plot as well.

I'm mentioning you on the AH.

...youre really getting the hang of this, Sir...this one turned out better written than the others and a much more indepth story with a semi buried story line on what will happen next...as in with the cops, her parents...instead of her just getting fucked and sucking all the time...impressed. respectfully fan in Texas naynay

Making the parents watch it? You are a mean, mean person. Even better than before. Excellent writing, great descriptiveness, frightening with the way she's responding. Cannot wait for the next chapter.

....S-Des