All Comments on 'Abduction of Steph Ch. 03'
by OldDog
- 12 Comments
Anonymousalmost 18 years agoThis is the most inventive and clever story and I loved it. It is so arousing that you have to savor every word. I would love to have been Steph!!
Anonymousover 17 years agoUnexpectedly stole me away from my norm and I could not stop reading or dripping without even a touch to myself. Magnificent, powerful and intense. I don't wish to be Steph... I was Steph! Thanks Old Dog for the many orgasms, and the more to come.
Pissefolleover 15 years agothis is one of the best stories i've ever read. not just out of the erotica that i've indulged in - i'm talking about any story i've ever read, period. the plot is thick and rich - not just focused on tits and ass and fucking. there aren't enough stories like this one.
keep writing, please!
Anonymousover 15 years agoReally fascinating story that held your attention. I wanted to know what was going to happen next and to know who the mystery man was. I am thinking I didn't notice the last chapter was insest. That does nothing for me but turn me off. Still gave you 4 stars for the rest of the story.
Anonymousabout 15 years agoYeah the incest totally ruined the ending for me.. I was nearing orgasm myself but when he said "You've known me all your life" I knew immediately and immediately came down from my high. You are a wonderful writer... and I loved the first two parts of this story. But I wish you had filed this final part under incest instead of the reluctance...
Anonymousabout 15 years agoWonderful story of seduction, but why did you make the captor her father?!???! This incest ruins the series, for me.
Anonymousabout 13 years agoA spoiler, just the way the end spoils the whole series.
Anonymousabout 11 years agoWas Such a great story but the ending just ruined it for me and actually wasn't at all sexy, throwing that in made me feel dirty in the wrong way. It wasn't needed and if I could ask you anything it would be to Please Please change it?
Anonymousabout 11 years agoKinda have to vote with the pitchfork brigade. Anybody but daddy. The rest of this was fantasy red hot.
Anonymousalmost 10 years agoI did not see that coming!!! It kinda makes sense and is actually kinda cute. Good job...I'm bookmarking this one as one of my favorites.
