All Comments on 'About Me and My Boyfriend'

There is much to enjoy here, but this is just the beginning, I hope

Mmh. The fun & games were a blast, if You are into Ds or pet play. However. where does it lead to, plot wise? Not really convincing on a stand alone basis, too many loose ends for my taste.

Seems like Shiori and lio had explored some consensual, fun fetish games together. But why did it not last? She seemed to enjoy it despite her mixed feelings, wasn't she? Did lio do something bad later on, we just don't know about, yet?

And is there anything starting between narrator "he" and Shiori? And what? A healing vanilla relationship or again a kinky fetish one, possibly a bit more safe and consensual?

Just wondering, there would be much potential for a sequel. Anyway, thanks for an entertaining start.

another story with no ending !!

As all the others literotica writers I write my stories for free. So, besides the sheer pleasure of writing, the remaining satisfactions are the views, ratings, and comments. When I see that a story is not appreciated as I wish, my motivation declines.

So complaining about the story not ending will motivate me to write more.

Long stories see the readership go down, which is why I rarely do sequels - the readers will be surely less than the previous installments.

BTW, "Shiori at the her boyfriend's house" is actually a continuation of this story (but doesn't end it ;))